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Old 11-24-2003, 06:27 PM   #20
Brian 57
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Join Date: Apr 2002
Location: Utica NY USA
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OK, I'll take a stab. You guys have inspired me!!! Sorry the meter and rhyme pattern is different, but I guess I'm a one-trick pony when it comes to that sort of thing.

Bob Seeger on the stereo
of a Chevy truck in the drive
You'll separate the bass and treble
from the song that is our lives.
I'm not like a rock, my love
It's you that's against the wind
We've just similies and metaphors
to describe what we've been.

Look in the mirror
Tell me what you see
Do those eyes reflect your soul
Tell me darling where you will be.


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