If you people have any ideas to improve the Chorus slightly...we can work on that after the verses are done. I know its not the greatest chorus...but its a start. I'm not asking for alot of thought here...ok here is a Verse of my own (just making it up here)
...Verse 1
A King on a throne
beheld the treasures he owned
The mightiest was he
With his skills sharply honed
He still couldn't sew
the seeds of love...she...
was a farmers daughter
just as pure as the water
and eyes as blue as the sea
From the east,they sought her
Then finally bought her.
Honor lost for duty.
When the King heard, he faught her
captives and got her
safely away and free.
The fire is strong
but something is wrong
He kneels before her and plees...
Chorus:
Look into the mirror
Tell me what you see
Do those eyes reflect your soul
Tell me darling, (can you ever trust me)
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knightmoves
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