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Old 02-07-2000, 09:13 PM   #14
Lightfoot678
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Hi, Jane here. I'm new! Anyway, I read "If You Could Read My Mind" not long ago, and kept feeling, as you do, that someone else doubtless could've written the story better. It has a real lack of detail. Maybe a woman's touch was needed!
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