Thank you guys, and I have three other songs at
www.broadjam.com/johnlister including a BLUES number that perhaps does feature a little more musicianship, though I doubt it will meet franco's standards either. It is a simplistic standard blues number, and that's all it's supposed to be.
Another tune is from the "A New Day" CD and a third is kind of a love gone bad song that might be good in a movie setting.
I really do appreciate everyone's comments here, including the constructive portion of franco's. I'm glad my friend Yuri turned me on to this group!